為什么你的托福成績得不到？
To begin with,by no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays.Due to the proliferation of hi-tech devices,such as smart phones with Internet connection,education is no longer restrained into traditional classroom.To be more specific,not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time,but also,thanks to the proGREssive technology of storing data,various kinds of information is available online.Therefore,students are bestowed with more opportunities of self-training in the long term.A salient example can be used here to illustrate my point of view.I used to hate doing research since searching for information always took me a long time.However,since several years ago,I began enjoying collecting resources online,such as E-books and others’thesis,sometimes with my smart phone.To be honest,it is a way full of pleasure and convenience,which denotes that education is a lot easier today.
我們看到以上這段的時(shí)候，是不是覺得自己也能寫的出來呢？但是你的拿到手跟以上相比，你少的就是：清晰、明了，也沒有什么超難的詞匯。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)其中還是有長難句的使用的，但是我們需要知道一點(diǎn)，長句子并不意味著就能拿到，但是長句的表達(dá)能力也是我們必備的寫作條件，代表著自己的水平。我們打個(gè)比方，如果一段話是表達(dá)清晰流暢都是短句，或者又是表達(dá)清晰流暢其中夾雜著長句，且語法正確，那么肯定是帶有長句的寫作相比較而言分?jǐn)?shù)高一點(diǎn)的。長難句的運(yùn)用也是好的，但是難詞就不要輕易觸碰了，除非你有十足的把握。
上面的例文中，能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)在以前初學(xué)英語的時(shí)候常見語法，否定詞在句首，可以使用部分倒裝，部分倒裝的結(jié)構(gòu)是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞/助動(dòng)詞+主語+剩余動(dòng)詞，舉例如下：
By no means are we supposed to lose sight of the fact that it is much easier for people to get access to information nowadays.
Never should we ignore the importance of mental health on children’s development.
此外，我們還可以看到not only在句首的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，Not only倒裝，but also不倒裝
Not only are people able to obtain resources in an extremely short period of time,but also,thanks to the progressive technology of storing data,various kinds of information is available online.
Only放在句首，也是一個(gè)常見的倒裝句結(jié)。
only by taking diverse jobs can we truly know our abilities and interests.
接下來，我再分享另外一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)：懸垂結(jié)構(gòu)，我更愿意稱之為SVO,doing./Doing,SVO在這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)中，我們要求句子只有一個(gè)主語S，一個(gè)主句SVO，而doing可以理解成是主語S的動(dòng)作，或者是SVO這個(gè)句子引發(fā)的伴隨狀態(tài)，充當(dāng)狀語部分，例句如下：
Walking on the street,I met an old friend.
Most people are busy in their daily life,earning more money for their families.
Thinking of the fact that more people tend to study English,schools set up English groups.
Considering the fact that sharing ideas with net friends with various backgrounds can lead to numerous precious information,students can draw more precise conclusions and make wiser decisions while chatting online.
Being impressed by WTO,China’s economy is growing stronger.
同樣，在較后這個(gè)句子中Being impressed by WTO,China’s economy is growing stronger.是可以理解成主語China’s economy和impressed是被動(dòng)關(guān)系的，所以延伸出一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)SVO,done./Done,SVO.
Impressed by WTO,China’s economy is growing stronger.
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