?托?？荚囎鳛槿蛐缘挠⒄Z水平考試之一，現(xiàn)在也是有越來越多的小伙伴加入了托福考試的陣營。不過呢，也有一些剛剛?cè)腴T的小伙伴對于托?？荚囘€不太熟悉，托?？荚嚳偣灿兴膫€部分，分別是聽力、閱讀、寫作和口語。寫作作為其中很重要的一個考試內(nèi)容，那托福寫作考試形式是怎樣的，還有一些小伙伴想知道我們一般會在托福寫作方面遇到哪些問題。今天學校百科小編就為大家整理了一些有關(guān)大家在托福寫作方面通常會遇到的問題，希望能夠幫助到大家。?

一、托福寫作方面通常遇到的問題

結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤

例：I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of　books.

當使用連詞將一系列的單詞聯(lián)接起來的時候，應(yīng)當使用詞性相同或同一類型的短語。

寫作錯誤

例：Many companies began using computers mouth.

段落過長，不分段，主語與動詞一致問題。

She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a　long time.主語和動詞在數(shù)方面不一致。

句子搭配混亂

We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.

措辭過長或不清。換言之，句子顯得滑稽可笑。

過度使用縮寫

在正式的寫作中不要使用縮寫形式（cant,dont,its,well,theyve等等），而應(yīng)當使用單詞的完整形式（cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have等等）。

關(guān)聯(lián)詞語重復

Since I want to go to a good school,therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.

不能在該句的主要主語和主要動詞前使用連詞。

句子寫作不完整

Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example,my friend in high school.

句子沒有主要主語或主要動詞，因為其實它應(yīng)是一個從句。這是一個非常常見的錯誤，修改的方法是將兩個句子連接起來。

濫用某些詞匯

When I got home,I got tired,so I got a book and got into bed.

Get太不正式，意思也過于含糊，不適合用在正式的場合。應(yīng)將get改為一個更加具體的單詞，如become,receive,find,achieve,等等。

書寫模糊表達不清

I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.

傳的信息不正確，或者讓人聽起來覺得可能不正確（如果確實是正確的，應(yīng)當解釋為什么這樣，因為讀者不認為是正確的）。

上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我們不能絕對地說每一件新東西都是從美國誕生的。為保險起見，應(yīng)當使用many或most.非英語單詞Computers are very helpful and advantageable. 盡管看起來象個單詞，其實不是，至少不是個英文單詞。使用這個單詞的另一種形式。

二、托福寫作備考時遇到這些問題怎么破

無話可說：

有些同學一說到舉例子就只能絞盡腦汁編：“想當初，我當年，怎樣怎樣后導致了怎樣怎樣，所以我認為怎樣怎樣才?！庇龅侥承嵲诔恫坏阶约荷砩系木椭荒苊扇簛頃砣サ囊驗樗?。

事實上，這個Forexample并不一定需要這么具體的例子。給出一種情形假設(shè)并告知這個情形下后果的也是示例的一種，并且也能夠清晰有力的支撐你的觀點。

另外就是要增強自己的發(fā)散性思維，比如就拿前面的“極簡”來說，你可能從服裝穿搭、收納整理看到它，但是它背后的價值觀和道理其實可以適用于寫作、時間規(guī)劃、交互設(shè)計、音樂創(chuàng)作呈現(xiàn)等等方面。

所以不要被題目給的范圍限定住思路的范圍，很多東西的邊界是可以打破的，而你平時的做題、閱讀哪怕是看新聞、娛樂節(jié)目、電影電視劇都可以作為你素材積累的來源，從而服務(wù)于你的寫作。

以上是寫不出來的，還有一些同學是寫出來寫high過頭的，那么面對這種該如何避免呢？

寫跑題：

解題要在點兒上

一般來說，大家在知道按照總分總寫法后，大體的邏輯和結(jié)構(gòu)是過得去的。不過在細節(jié)上就可能存在著一些問題。

仔細閱讀題目，看看最終讓你說的是哪個點，不要問的“是否支持”結(jié)果寫成“這樣好不好”。在看清題目后列出你的觀點和分論點的提綱，得出整體文章框架后再發(fā)散思維補充細節(jié)。

自相矛盾了、寫high了就寫歪了

這兩個都是在舉例中容易出現(xiàn)的，偏離了你提出的論點。一方面我們在寫作中要時刻記得自己剛才說了什么、整體說的是什么論點，另一方面還要注意平時多看書看報積累素材，別因為湊論據(jù)而導致上述悲劇的發(fā)生。

語法錯誤、用詞不準等問題：

1.不要一味追求詞匯豐富而瞎替換

沒有合適的替換詞的時候也要注意，不要貿(mào)然瞎替換。換的意思一樣還好說，如果表達的不是同質(zhì)性事物就非常的尷尬了。

2.不要盲目使用詞匯

詞匯最重要的是表達準確?？创魍嬗昧酸茇∮X得高端洋氣上檔次，寫你奔走在校園的小路上也來個行，不是一個意思也非常不搭?？纯匆恍┭葜v和一些寫得非常好的原文書，其實里面并沒有用太多“高難度”詞匯，而是用最樸實的語言寫出美的句子。

Time is a bird forever on the wing.——T.W.Robertson時間是一只永遠在飛翔的鳥。

三、托福寫作技巧

綜合寫作的技巧如下

邊看邊記

托?？荚囍?，會要求閱讀一篇學術(shù)論文作為考試的前提。在這一部分，閱讀一篇250到300個單詞的學術(shù)文章，并在短時間內(nèi)對閱讀段落的要點做筆記。下面是閱讀段落時應(yīng)該記住的關(guān)鍵信息。

例：

It is common knowledge that forecasting is an attempt by meteorologists to determine what weather will be like in the future. Hindcasting is the opposite of forecasting, an attempt to determine what weather was like in the past. Meteorologists wish that records of weather had been kept in full for at least a few millennia, but it has been only in the last century that detailed records of the weather have been kept. Thus, meteorologists need to hindcast the weather, and they do so by using all sorts of information from other fields as diverse as archeology, botany, geology, literature, and art. These pieces of information from other fields that are used as a basis for drawing conclusions about what the weather must have been like at some point in the past are called proxies.

閱讀時對主題和要點做筆記：

Topic of Listening Passage:

hindcasting

Main points about hindcasting:

detailed weather records kept for less than a century

proxies used to hindcast weather

邊聽邊記

這一部分會聽一篇1到2分鐘學術(shù)文章，在聽的過程中對要點進行記錄。

例：

:Now let me talk about how hindcasting was used in one particular situation. This situation has to do with the weather in seventeenth-century Holland. It appears, from proxies in paintings from the time by numerous artists, that the weather in Holland in the seventeenth century was much colder than it is today. Seventeenth-century paintings show really cold winter landscapes with huge snow drifts and ice skaters skating on frozen canals. Since it's unusual today for snow to drift as high as it is in the paintings and for the canals to freeze over so that skaters can skate across them as they are in the paintings, these paintings appear to serve as proxies that demonstrate that the weather when the paintings were created in the seventeenth century was much colder than it is today.

筆記：

Topic of Listening Passage: paintings that are proxies showing weather in 17th-century Holland colder than today

Details:in 17th-century paintings showing colder weather :

- huge snow drifts higher than today's drifts

- on canals that are not frozen today

寫作前規(guī)劃

拿到一個作文題目記得進行頭腦風暴：能寫些什么？對這個話題有什么看法？有哪些個人經(jīng)驗？有沒有了解的專業(yè)知識或者新聞？

例：

Question：

How does the information in the listening passage about the weather in seventeenth-century Holland shed light on the information on hindcasting in the reading passage?

Reading Passage= A technique used by meteorologists

Topic Of Reading Passage:hindcasting

Main points about hindcasting:

- detailed weather records kept for less than a century

- proxies used to hindcast weather

Listening Passage= An example of the technique

Topic of listening passage:paintings that are proxies showing weather in 17th-century Holland colder than today

Details in 17th-century paintings showing colder weather:

- huge snow drifts higher than today's drifts

- skaters on canals that are not frozen today

主題陳述

?????Look at this information from the integrated writing task on hindcasting and the weather in seventeenth-century Holland.

Reading Passage= a technique used by meteorologists

Topic of listening passage:hindcasting

Listening Passage= an example of the technique

Topic of listening passage:paintings that are proxies showing weather in 17th-century Holland colder than today????

段落輔助

在開始寫作之前先研究筆記，在寫的時候要考慮段落輔助，去介紹每一段的中心思想，并且有足夠的細節(jié)去支撐中心的成立。

Topic of listening passage:hindcasting

main points about hindcasting:

detailed weather records kept for less than a century

proxies used to hindcast weather

The reading passage discusses the technique?of hindcasting, which is a method used by meteorologists to try to determine what the weather ?match?was like in the past. One point that is made about this meteorological metho is that detailed??match??weather records have not been kept for long. As a result, meteorologists have had to find another way to determine what the weather was like in the past. They developed a method of hindcasting using proxies, which are pieces of information from other fields.

分類練習

ETS發(fā)布的作文主題就足夠練習，不需額外找題目做。對于官方給出的作文題目合集，小伙伴們可以按照文章類別、題目類型等方式分類練習。

寫作時最怕跑題，如果材料中有不熟悉的單詞，盡量通過上下文猜測含義，而不是寫一些與主題無關(guān)的句子，擦邊球會降低你的分數(shù)。隔一段時間重寫某一主題，能夠更好的分析出進步和不足，強化練習。

檢查細節(jié)

關(guān)于托福寫作方面通常遇到的問題 托福寫作備考時遇到這些問題怎么破的介紹就到這里，以上就是小編整理的托福寫作方面通常遇到的問題 托福寫作備考時遇到這些問題怎么破全部內(nèi)容了，歡迎大家留言討論。訪問學校百科網(wǎng)了解更多托福相關(guān)內(nèi)容